Part four.five: something I can never have

Sorry for the lack of progress. Lots happening in the real world lately with work and engagements. Plus the footy is back.

Plan on working on the story this week. I have a plan in my head, at least for the immediate future.

Daniel has disappeared so Careless has some hunting to do. The story will stay in NY for a while but ultimately ends up back in Melbourne. From there, your guess is as good as mine.

I'm leaning towards a detective type mystery. She's trapped in her past here and needs to figure a way out. At the same time, she wonders about happiness and normalcy- something she has never had. The very idea of happiness is foreign to her. She thinks she has in during her time in NY, but this quickly becomes a nightmare as she realises that everything isn't quite where it belongs. Careless doesn't know what it means to just sit and enjoy the breeze by the bay, so is confused by what Daniel means to her, and can't help but be suspicious of why he showed up in her life in the first place.

Hey how about I show you some? Here is a section from Chapter 2. You can find it on my Tumblr http://themrdaprano.tumblr.com/

More soon